Editing Services

An editor provides another look at your story through detailed eyes. With my editing services, I focus on strengthening your writing so your story can shine through. I will never seek to rewrite your work; instead, I will show you where you can improve, make suggestions, and help you understand writing style and genre conventions. I will be available to answer any questions you have along the way, too.

Levels of editing

Developmental editing

A focus on big picture elements of your story, including plot line, pacing, character development, setting, POV, and dialogue. I will make in-line comments and send a separate write-up with my feedback and suggestions.

For developmental edits, I’ve learned from and will reference a variety of works, such as On Writing by Stephen King, The Art of Fiction by John Gardner, and the series, Elements of Fiction Writing. I also draw from my experience as an author of more than a dozen novels.

Cost: $.006/word

Line editing

A detailed analysis and editing of a book’s sentence structure, flow, style, word choice, mood, tone, grammar, and punctuation. I will make in-line edits directly in the text with Track Changes on.

I do line edits using the Chicago Manual of Style, while taking into account an author’s personal style. I have a Teaching English as a Foreign Language Certificate and have taught English to speakers of other languages, so I have a unique grasp on English grammar, vocabulary, and usage.

Cost: $.007/word

Combined editing: I can offer both developmental and line editing on a project in two rounds. Cost per word varies by project.

How it works

I use Microsoft Word’s Track Changes to make changes line by line. I also use comments throughout the document to make suggestions, share my reading experience (for developmental editing), or explain my edits (for line editing).

You will also receive a write-up of my overall thoughts. For developmental editing, this will be longer. It will cover all the important elements of fiction and my recommendations for improving the work. For line editing, I will make general suggestions and recommendations to improve your writing style.

I accept payment via PayPal and/or Stripe. Half will be due at the beginning of the project, and half will be due upon delivery.

Genres accepted

I will edit short stories, novellas, and novels in the following genres:

  • Young Adult
  • Fantasy
  • Light science fiction
  • Mainstream/upmarket
  • Romance (not erotica, but I will read steamy scenes)

Sample edits

Sample edits are free and will be completed in 2-3 business days. This will give you the opportunity to see my style of editing.

Email me at contact@emilyannloveall.com with your preferred style of editing and an attachment of your writing.

  • For line edits, I will sample edit up to 1000 words.
  • For developmental edits, I will sample edit 3000 words.

Portfolio

  • Legally Undercover by Rachel Kall
  • The George Corbins by Kara Leigh Miller
  • The Sacrificed by Jordan Link
  • Goal by Bellamy Black

About me

I’ve been writing ever since I was a little girl and I have written fifteen novels, four novellas, and dozens of short stories, so I understand writing from an author’s perspective. I worked as an editor for a small press called Entranced Publishing for two years. I’ve spent countless hours in partnership with other writers doing free critique work and beta reading.